Question

假如你和王翔是同班同學，請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，以My Good Friend為題寫一篇60個詞左右的短文，向你的朋友介紹一下王翔。要求表中的所有信息均用上。

Name	Wang Xiang (a student)
From	Guangdong, China
Age	14
Look	tall, round face, wide mouth, big eyes
Family	father (an office worker), mother (a nurse), brother (12, a student)
Favorite food	chicken
dinner	rice, fish and vegetables

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Answer 1

One possible version：

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is WangXiang. He is a student. He is fourteen years old. He lives in Guangdong in China. He is tall with a round face ,a wide mouth and big eyes. His father is an office worker and his mother is a nurse. His brother is 12 years old and he is a student, too. His favorite food is chicken. He usually has rice, fish and vegetables for dinner.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的好朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：He is ……， His father is ......及He usually has 等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹他的家人，最后介紹他喜歡的食物。此處用了 with a round face， favorite food，has rice 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。