Question

【題目】 假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter在來(lái)信中詢問(wèn)你和你的同學(xué)們?cè)谛履昀锒枷Ｍ�在哪些方面有所提�?/span>?為此.你在你們班做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)給Peter回信,簡(jiǎn)要介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约旱奶嵘��?jì)劃(至少兩個(gè)計(jì)劃)以及你將如何落實(shí),讓新的一年過(guò)得有意義。

要求:

1.作文要點(diǎn)齊全，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，邏輯嚴(yán)密.句意通順:

2.注意時(shí)態(tài);

3.字?jǐn)?shù):80-100詞;

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名及校名。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear from you. For your questions in the letter, I did some research in our class. Students mainly want to improve in these four aspects in the next year. There are learning, physical, interpersonal and hobbies. Among them, there are many people who want to improve their study and hobbies, because we all think it is most important to study, because we will take entrance examination in another year.

For me, I want to improve my study and interpersonal relationship. Although I’m still learning well, I still make mistakes sometimes, so I want to improve. When I communicate with my parents, I always feel that they don’t understand my ideas, so I will tell my friends anything, but I really want to tell my parents, but I don’t know how I should say it. So I think I can improve on that.

We all hope to make some progress in the next year and live a more meaningful year.

Your

LiMing

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：文章主要是以問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的形式展開(kāi)描述，把圖表中要求的四個(gè)要提升的方面寫(xiě)清楚具體，分清主次要點(diǎn)，要以自己為例寫(xiě)出想要改善的方面以及原因。