Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分10分）

在我們的生活中，有很多東西對我們是很重要的。比如愛、幫助、友誼、家人、朋友、健康、運動、夢想、愛好、音樂、讀書等。請根據(jù)提示，結合自身的感受，以______________Is Very Important in My Life為題寫一篇文章。

要求：1、補全所給的題目，用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于80詞

2、緊扣主題，適當發(fā)揮；

3、語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，注意時態(tài)

4、文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計算

____________ Is Very Important My Life

Answer 1

【答案】

My Classmate Is Very Important in My Life

I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. For me, that's my classmate, Tom.

I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.

From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于開放性文體，能夠很大程度上調(diào)動學生的想象空間，學生可以結合自己的經(jīng)歷來寫，首先每個人心中都有一個重要的人物，結合自己的一次經(jīng)歷，敘述他是如何幫助我的，為什么留下了最深的印象。最后對自己所經(jīng)歷的事情的感受進行描寫。

寫作亮點：短文用了短語和句式。如：I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.等，文章還用了一些連詞如that，because，until等，增加了文章的亮點。