Question

北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生Simon目前學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不理想，他寫(xiě)信給青少年輔導(dǎo)員Sigmund Friend，傾訴困惑，尋求幫助。假設(shè)你是Sigmund Friend, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的信息，完成一封給Simon的回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

Simon’s problems	在學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)、英語(yǔ)方面有困難；現(xiàn)在想要提高但不知道怎么辦。
Your suggestions	仔細(xì)計(jì)劃好時(shí)間：當(dāng)你計(jì)劃你的一周時(shí)，你應(yīng)該把你不得不要做的事列出一個(gè)清單來(lái)。 充分利用好課堂時(shí)間：課上聽(tīng)好老師所講的一切；適時(shí)記好筆記，它是一種學(xué)習(xí)的好方法。 培養(yǎng)對(duì)待考試的良好心態(tài)：考試的目的在于考查你對(duì)一門科目學(xué)到了什么;即使考得不夠好也不必太憂慮;下次取得進(jìn)步更為重要。 ……
Your expectation	希望你的答復(fù)對(duì)Simon有價(jià)值。

注意：
1. 書(shū)信須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2. 建議部分的第4個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容須用1～2句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，已給出的句子，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Simon
Thank you for your letter. You say that ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
You probably think you will never be a top student. This is not necessarily so, however. Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to. Here’s how.
Plan your time carefully. When you plan your week, you should make a list of things that you have to do.
Make good use of your time in class. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Develop a good attitude about tests. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my answers will be valuable to you.
Best wishes
Sigmund Friend

Answer 1

Dear Simon
Thank you for your letter. You say that you have difficulty/difficulties/problems with English and Math. Now you want to improve them but don’t know what to do.
You probably think you will never be a top student. This is not necessarily so, however. Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to. Here’s how.
Plan your time carefully. When you plan your week, you should make a list of things that you have to do.
Make good use of your time in class. Listen to everything the teachers say in class. Take notes at the right time. It’s a good way of learning.
Develop a good attitude about tests. The purpose of a test is to show what you have learned about a subject. You don’t need to worry too much even if you haven’t done well enough in tests. It’s more important to make progress next time.
Also, you can find a good place to study. …
I hope my answers will be valuable to you.
Best wishes
Sigmund Friend       

試題分析：本題要求給Simon寫(xiě)一封信，給他一些建議幫他解除困惑。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)書(shū)寫(xiě)，可以用第二人稱。一定要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，再給幾點(diǎn)建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。