Question

【題目】隨著手機功能日益增多，智能手機（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。越來越多的年輕人沉迷于手機娛樂活動，我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇短文。

要求：

1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

參考詞匯：1. have effects on 2. concentrate on 3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of

2.詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；

3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays with the development of the Internet, smart phones are widely used among people .Phubbers can be seen here and there. We can use phones to chat online, go shopping, know about lots of news, play mobile games and do other activities. There are many people who are crazy about their advantages but few people noticed it has some bad effects on them.

To begin with, more people have become silent because they concentrate more on mobile phones, which influences their relationship with their friends and families. They are not glad to have a face-to-face conversation with others anymore. Many students spend too much time on the phones in their spare time or at home so that they can’t finish their homework on time. Some students can’t put their hearts into studies. Some people become so addicted to them that they even use them when driving, which often lead to traffic accidents. Last but not least, using phones for a long time is bad for our health.

As a student, we should learn to make good use of phones. We should spend more time on our study first. We should go out to exercise, enjoy more sunshine and communicate with others.

【解析】本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現(xiàn)象與弊端：揭示現(xiàn)代人用手機的惡習(xí)及其產(chǎn)生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現(xiàn)代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。第三人稱或第一稱形式。

寫作亮點：短文首先結(jié)合現(xiàn)代人使用手機的現(xiàn)象，說明了人們使用手機給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴人們怎樣正確地使用好手機。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等結(jié)構(gòu)，給短文增色不少。