Question

9．假如你是李明．本周五早上你班同學(xué)將去格林農(nóng)場參加實(shí)踐活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你用英語草擬一則通知．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1、摘蔬菜，給植物澆水；
2、7點(diǎn)校門口集合，乘車前往；
3、體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場生活，活動(dòng)約2小時(shí)；
4、相互關(guān)照，注意安全；
5、補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)有關(guān)事項(xiàng)．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)：60-80；
2、不要逐條翻譯，內(nèi)容要連貫；
3、通知的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：experience v．體驗(yàn) pick v．摘activity n．活動(dòng)
Fellow students，
Our class are going to Green Farm this Friday morning，Would you like to experience farm life？We can pick up vegetables and water the plants．We'll
stay there for about 2 hours．I bet the meaningful activity will make the trip unforgettable．
We'll meet at 7am at the school gate and take a bus there．Remember always bewith your classmates，help each other andnever do anything that may hurt you．
By the way，you'd better wear your sports shoes．Have a good time．
Thank you for your attention．

Answer 1

分析 本篇是一篇提綱作文，作文前要仔細(xì)審題，寫作時(shí)要抓住文章的要點(diǎn)，寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1、摘蔬菜，給植物澆水；2、7點(diǎn)校門口集合，乘車前往；3、體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場生活，活動(dòng)約2小時(shí)；4、相互關(guān)照，注意安全．根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容的需要，此文主要用第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式來寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般將來時(shí)．寫作時(shí)做到句意通順、意思連貫．
重要短語和句型：
this Friday morning本周五早上；
pick up 摘；
for about 2 hours大約兩個(gè)小時(shí)；
take a bus 乘公共汽車；
help each other 互相幫助；
By the way順便說一下；
Have a good time，玩的高興；
Would you like to experience farm life？你想體驗(yàn)一下農(nóng)場的生活嗎？
We'll meet at 7am at the school gate and take a bus there．我們將7點(diǎn)鐘在校門口集合，并且乘車前往．
you'd better wear your sports shoes．你最好穿上運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋．
Thank you for your attention謝謝你的關(guān)注．

解答 Our class are going to Green Farm this Friday morning．Would you like to experience farm life？We can pick up vegetables and water the plants．We'll stay there for about 2 hours．I bet the meaningful activity will make the trip unforgettable．【引出話題】
   We'll meet at 7am at the school gate and take a bus there．Remember always be with your classmates，help each other and never do anything that may hurt you．By the way，you'd better wear your sports shoes．Have a good time．【注意事項(xiàng)】
   Thank you for your attention．【結(jié)束語】

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