Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容的提示，以“Changes in my hometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100字左右的短文。

	過(guò)去	現(xiàn)在
環(huán)境	道路臟，狹小，到處是垃圾 有大塊的空地	道路寬闊干凈、路邊綠樹成蔭 有商店和高樓大廈
生活	矮小的房子 收音機(jī)、電視	新公寓 電腦、網(wǎng)絡(luò)和手機(jī)
交通	步行、騎車	公交車、出租車、私家車
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

Changes in my hometown

Great changes ___________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。寫出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，從對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去開始描述，然后轉(zhuǎn)入對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的情況介紹，通過(guò)對(duì)以往的面貌與現(xiàn)在面貌進(jìn)行對(duì)比，體現(xiàn)出如今人們生活的幸福與快樂(lè)。同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，如：take place發(fā)生；turn greener變得更綠；large and bright大而明亮等等為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。