Question

【題目】 假設(shè)你是張文，是江陰星光中學(xué) (Jiangyin Starlight Middle School) 的一名學(xué)生，你將代表你校參加CCTC舉辦的“A good habit, a successful life”為主題的演講，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿。

Introduce yourself (name, school ...)

Why good habits are important

How you develop good habits (lifestyle; hobbies; …

注意事項(xiàng)：

1. 演講稿根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；

2. 路程圖括號(hào)部分為非限定性?xún)?nèi)容，僅供參考；

3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

4. 演講稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息。

Ladies and gentlemen,

It's a great honor for me to speak here. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Trust me! If you have a good habit, you will have a successful life in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Ladies and gentlemen,

It's a great honor for me to speak here.

I’m a student from Jiangyin Starlight Middle School. My name is Zhang Wen. Good habits are very important to all of us. It can not only build up our body and keep us healthy but also make our mind clear and smart. It can help us become more organized, too. In order to have a good habit, I have developed a good lifestyle. I have changed my diet and I exercise a lot every day. I plan my time more carefully to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies.

Trust me! If you have a good habit, you will have a successful life in the future.

【解析】

題干根據(jù)題干，可知這一篇演講稿，主要內(nèi)容是代表學(xué)校參加以“良好的習(xí)慣，成功的生活”為主題寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿。文章內(nèi)容分為三個(gè)層面，首先介紹自己，然后闡述良好習(xí)慣的重要性，最后談?wù)勗鯓优囵B(yǎng)好習(xí)慣。演講稿內(nèi)容層次清晰，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

例文這是一篇優(yōu)秀的例文，很好的完成了試題所給的任務(wù)，符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)境的表達(dá)。開(kāi)頭先介紹了自己的學(xué)校和姓名，然后從四個(gè)方面闡述了好習(xí)慣的重要性，最后詳細(xì)介紹了自己已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成了哪些好習(xí)慣。例文寫(xiě)的非常詳細(xì)與具體，當(dāng)中還有一些亮點(diǎn)詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。

亮點(diǎn)詞句：

短語(yǔ)：not only… but also… 不僅……而且……； build up 增強(qiáng)； change my diet 改變飲食； achieve a balance between 在……之間達(dá)成平衡。

句型：(1) It can not only build up our body and keep us healthy but also make our mind clear and smart. 它不僅可以增強(qiáng)我們的身體，使我們保持健康，還可以使我們的頭腦清晰、聰明。 make our mind clear and smart使我們的頭腦清晰、聰明。 (2) In order to have a good habit, I have developed a good lifestyle. 為了養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣，我養(yǎng)成了良好的生活方式。developed a good lifestyle 養(yǎng)成了良好的生活方式。（3）I plan my time more carefully to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies. 我會(huì)更仔細(xì)地計(jì)劃時(shí)間，以在學(xué)習(xí)和愛(ài)好之間取得平衡。achieve a balance between 在……之間達(dá)成平衡。