Question

假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友 Annie打算暑假來(lái)你市旅游，她想了解一下你市東方海灘的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給她寫(xiě)一封80-100 詞的e-mail，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

名稱(chēng)	東方海灘
位置	城東10公里
特點(diǎn)	世界最好的海灘之一，沙細(xì)，水凈，浪小
最適合的運(yùn)動(dòng)	游泳，沙灘排球
公用設(shè)施	洗手間，更衣室，商店
交通條件	有多路去海灘的公交車(chē)，出租車(chē)隨時(shí)乘坐

參考詞語(yǔ)：

1． East Beach   東方海灘                        2.fine   adj. (  沙) 細(xì)的

3.  be suitable       適合的 …                    4. dressing room  n. 更衣室，

 Dear Annie,

I’m very glad to hear that you’ll travel to my city.                                   

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Annie,

I’m very glad to hear that you’ll travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about the East Beach.

The East Beach is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away. It’s one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, soft and clean. The water is clear with small waves. It’s suitable for swimming and playing volleyball.

You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can also take a taxi at any time. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a great time there.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是材料作文。所要描述的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給列出了。學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真審題。首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，這是對(duì)東方海灘的描述，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可但對(duì)于過(guò)去發(fā)生的一些事情，也會(huì)出現(xiàn)一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。因?yàn)槭墙o友人介紹，所以用第一人稱(chēng)。再者禁止逐句翻譯。注意連詞的應(yīng)用，銜接到各個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)，以提高作文檔次和點(diǎn)亮文章亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文出現(xiàn)一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)，be suitable for,適合,take sb to someplace,帶某人去某處，take a taxi,乘出租車(chē)，have a good time玩得愉快。It’s one of the best beaches in the world句子中出現(xiàn)one of 名詞復(fù)數(shù)，in the world 所以會(huì)出現(xiàn)最高級(jí)。You can get to the beach easily你很容易到達(dá)，easily用來(lái)修飾get to 。I think you will have a great time there，這句話中提到賓語(yǔ)從句。文中還出現(xiàn)一些高級(jí)詞匯如clean，suitable，fine,wave，提高文章的檔次。

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