Question

【題目】假如你是中央氣象臺主持人，現(xiàn)在進行早間天氣預(yù)報，請根據(jù)下列信息寫一段臺詞播報我國部分主要城市今天的天氣情況。要求：語言簡潔、準確；播報有序；詞數(shù)不少于60。

城市名稱	天氣情況	溫度	建議	備注
北京	多云	9℃~14℃
海爾濱	有雨		出門最好帶傘	東北部城市
上海	有風(fēng)	12℃~17℃
廣州	晴朗		適合旅行

Good morning! It's 7 o'clock. Here's the weather report for some big cities in China.

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning! It's 7 o'clock. Here's the weather report for some big cities in China. Beijing is cloudy. The temperature is between nine and fourteen degrees. There will be rain in Harbin and other northeast cities. It's better to take an umbrella to go out. It's windy in Shanghai and other east cities. The temperature is between twelve and seventeen degrees. It's sunny in Guangzhou. It's the best time to travel.

That's the weather report for today. Thank you for listening !

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我國北京、爾濱、上海和廣州的天氣以及適宜的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There will be……，It's……及The temperature is……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用數(shù)詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達感謝。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了時間，接下來介紹北京、爾濱、上海和廣州的天氣以及適宜人們的活動，最后指出總結(jié)并表示感謝。此處用了between nine and fourteen degrees、go out、the best time to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。