Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （20分）

忙碌的初三生活已經(jīng)開始，如何安排好自己的初三學(xué)習(xí)和生活呢？沉重的課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)將取代一切嗎？答案當(dāng)然是否定的。如何合理安排自己的初三生活，你肯定有自己實實在在的打算。應(yīng)該怎樣完善自己，做到學(xué)習(xí)與生活兩不誤，請你以“How to be an excellent student”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容要點：

1.遵守校紀(jì)校規(guī)（按時到校、不吸煙 ）； 2.養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣（上課認(rèn)真聽講、多讀書等）；

3.在家?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)（1……，2……）； 4.與人溝通、互相幫助；

5.參加志愿者工作（volunteer work），如…等

要求：

1.包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐句翻譯，省略部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.語句通順、語法正確，80個詞左右。

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、地點和所在的學(xué)校名稱。

How to be an excellent student

Time goes by, now I am a student of Grade Nine.The life of the school is busier .I want to be an excellent student. But what should I do?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Time goes by, now I am a student of Grade Nine. The life of the school is busier .I want to be an excellent student. But what should I do?

At first I must obey the school rules. I will go to school on time and I will not smoke. To be an excellent student, it is important to have good study habits. I should listen carefully in class. I need to read as many books as I can. And I need to learn to relax.

Next I am going to communicate better with my teacher and classmates. Share something good with my friends and help each other. At home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework. I will wash the dishes and clean the room.

At last I will take an active part in the volunteer work as often as possible. And I will give school things to the school in the poor area.

I believe I will be an excellent and successful student

【解析】

試題分析： 這是篇提綱類作文，寫作前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和時態(tài)，可以用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。作文要包含所列的要點，不能有遺漏，各要點間可以用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使文章更流暢和緊湊。各要點也不能逐字逐句翻譯，可以加以補充使之更豐滿和充實。

寫作亮點： 這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)很清楚，要點齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確。文章中對于各要點用了一些表達(dá)層次的單詞，如At first首先；Next然后；At last最后。句中用了很多短語，如as … as I can盡可能…；try my best盡最大努力；take an active part in積極參加；as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常地。另外有一些長句子，如：To be an excellent student, it is important to have good study habits.成為一個優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生，養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣很重要。