Question

14．假如你是Mike，你的朋友Susan近來心情不好，請(qǐng)你給她發(fā)一封e-mail，提出合 理性的建議，幫助她調(diào)適心情．
字?jǐn)?shù)：80〜100字（首尾句已給出，不記入所要求的總字?jǐn)?shù)）．
供你參考的建議有：
sing，take a walk，do sports，write the diary，watch TV，listen to music，go shopping，go swimming，go outside…
Dear Susan，
When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may be suitable for you：
1．Go outside!Do something active．For example，take a walk，go swimming，or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass．
2．Do something you're good at!If you love to sing，then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3．Start a diary!Write down your thoughts，dreams，problems or anything you want!
In all，if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！
Best wishes�。�
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may ②be suitable for you．當(dāng)你感覺不舒服的時(shí)候，下面的建議可能適合你．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
②be suitable for 對(duì)…是適合的
高分句型二：
①In all，②if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！總之，如果你想感覺良好，你必須相信自己！
①in all總之，用于總結(jié)
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來

解答 One possible version
Dear Susan，
When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may be suitable for you：【高分句型一】【給Susan提出合理性的建議】
1．Go outside!Do something active．For example，take a walk，go swimming，or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass．
2．Do something you're good at!If you love to sing，then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3．Start a diary!Write down your thoughts，dreams，problems or anything you want!
In all，if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！【高分句型二】【總結(jié)全文】
Best wishes！
Yours，
Mike

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