Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加或一個(gè)單詞的刪除，其他錯(cuò)誤為單詞的修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧，并在其下面寫出增加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Jim,

I am glad tell you something about the traditional art in my hometown.

My hometown is Weifang. It lie in Shandong Province. It is know for kites making. In my hometown, the history of making kites can go back to over 2，000 year ago. Kites are main made of bamboo, strings and papers. Kites can be made into different the in sizes, shapes and colors. We all like flying kites in the sky at spring. Flying kites is interested. I hope you can come to my hometown one day and fly kites with mine.

Yours，

Wang Dong

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am glad ∧to tell you something about the traditional art in my hometown.

My hometown is Weifang. It lie,lies in Shandong Province. It is know, known for kites making. In my hometown, the history of making kites can go back to over 2，000 year,years ago. Kites are main,mainly made of bamboo, strings and papers,paper. Kites can be made into different the in sizes, shapes and colors. We all like flying kites in the sky at,in spring. Flying kites is interested,interesting. I hope you can come to my hometown one day and fly kites with mine,me.

Yours，

Wang Dong

【解析】

這篇短文主要是講述了作者對(duì)他家鄉(xiāng)的介紹。

be glad to do sth.表示樂于做某事，添加to

這里是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主要是it是單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞lie變第三人稱單數(shù)lies.

短語(yǔ)be known for…表示因……而聞名，這里把know變成known.。

over 2，000 years ago表示兩千年之前；這里year用復(fù)數(shù)years.

這里是副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，把main變成mianly.

Paper是不可數(shù)名詞，這里不能變復(fù)數(shù)。

can be made into different in sizes, shapes and colors.表示能被制成不同種類的型號(hào)，形狀和顏色。這里把the去掉。

在春天用介詞in, in spring表示在春天。

Flying kites是物作主語(yǔ)，表示有趣的用interseting。Interested是人做主語(yǔ)。

fly kites with sb.表示同某人放風(fēng)箏，代詞用賓格，這里用I的賓格me。