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2．目前，我市正在爭(zhēng)創(chuàng)省級(jí)文明城市，但社會(huì)仍然存在著一些類(lèi)似如圖所示的不良現(xiàn)象，這與文明城市的要求相去甚遠(yuǎn)．作為一名中學(xué)生，在日常生活中，我們應(yīng)該干什么？不應(yīng)該干什么？對(duì)此，校學(xué)生會(huì)擬舉行以"how to be a civilized student"為主題的英語(yǔ)作文比賽，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下圖反映的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文參賽．

注意：1．至少敘述三條日常生活中我們應(yīng)該普遍遵守的文明行為；
2．文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
3．文章的開(kāi)關(guān)已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
How To Be A Civilized Student
As we all know，our city is creating a civilized cityAs a student，we should do our best to do things with good manners．When some people are waiting for a bus，instead of waiting in line，they jump the queue and crowd into the bus．Some people spit in public，which makes the city dirty．
I think everyone should know what to do and what not to do in public．For example，we are supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble．When we are on a bus，we should give our seat to the old．It's our duty to follow the traffic rules and not to litter around．Besides，don't forget to keep low voice in public places．
In a word，if we follow all the rules，our city will be more beautiful．．

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分析 這是一篇看圖作文．內(nèi)容為作為一名中學(xué)生，敘述日常生活中我們應(yīng)該普遍遵守的文明行為，以"how to be a civilized student"為主題并結(jié)合下圖反映的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇文章．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．作為一名學(xué)生，應(yīng)有良好的行為；2．?dāng)⑹鋈粘Ｉ�活中�?yīng)遵守的文明行為；3．總結(jié)歸納文章．常用的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型有：do one's best to do sth．，instead of，be supposed to do等．

解答 As a student，we should do our best to do things with good manners．When some people are waiting for a bus，instead of waiting in line，they jump the queue and crowd into the bus．Some people spit in public，which makes the city dirty．
I think everyone should know what to do and what not to do in public．For example，we are supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble．When we are on a bus，we should give our seat to the old．It's our duty to follow the traffic rules and not to litter around．Besides，don't forget to keep low voice in public places．
In a word，if we follow all the rules，our city will be more beautiful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇看圖材料作文，所給材料給了考生較大的發(fā)揮空間，考生可敘述日常生活中的行為并談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性．注意主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．