Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

周日上午8：30 Dim 和他的朋友們?cè)诠珗@里玩。根據(jù)提示用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)寫(xiě)一篇60－80詞的短文。

Tony and Tom	play chess
The twins	fly kites
Lily	listen to music
Terry	make a phone call
Some girls	read under the tree
Two boys	swim
Dim and his girlfriend	talk with each other， have a picnic

Answer 1

【答案】

It’s 8:30 on Sunday morning. Dim and his friends are playing in a park. Look! Tony and Tom are playing chess. The twins are flying kites. Lily is listening to music. Terry is making a phone call. Some girls are reading under the tree. Two boys are swimming in the lake. Dim and his girlfriend are talking with each otherand having a picnic. What a great time they are having!

【解析】

試題分析：該題目要求根據(jù)提示用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)寫(xiě)一篇60－80詞的短文。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的結(jié)構(gòu)是“主語(yǔ)+be動(dòng)詞+doing”，特別要注意主語(yǔ)和be動(dòng)詞的搭配問(wèn)題。要做到主謂一致。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)： 該文語(yǔ)句流暢，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了題目中的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)。