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根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。

75. 成長(zhǎng)中每個(gè)人都要面對(duì)煩惱，并解決問(wèn)題。假設(shè)你叫劉明，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生艾麗的朋友，你收到了她的電子郵件，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)，回答她的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Hi! Liu Ming, I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice

  

Hi! Alice, I’m glad to hear from. ______________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Liu Ming

Answer 1

　　1. 回答她的問(wèn)題

　　2. 提出建議

　　3. 對(duì)于此事談?wù)勀愕目捶?/p>

　　來(lái)信內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明：

　　Alice表示自己的好友Angela問(wèn)自己借錢(qián)，但自己不知是否該借給她，擔(dān)心對(duì)方可能不能歸還。問(wèn)劉明是否遇到同樣的問(wèn)題？請(qǐng)劉明給自己一些建議，期待回信。

　　【解題思路】

　　依舊牢記"結(jié)構(gòu)、要點(diǎn)、邏輯、語(yǔ)法、亮點(diǎn)"五大要素，審題一定要仔細(xì)，看準(zhǔn)題目中的要點(diǎn)為：回答她的問(wèn)題；提出建議；對(duì)于此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

　　1. 結(jié)構(gòu)、要點(diǎn)

　　文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在來(lái)信中找問(wèn)題，很明顯，只有一個(gè)問(wèn)句" Do you have the same problem?" ，所以作文中應(yīng)該開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：I have the same problem. / I have never met things like this. 而且，來(lái)信的第一句話為" I'm so sad."， 所以第一部分內(nèi)容可以表示安慰 " Don't worry" 或者表示理解對(duì)方的感受 "I can understand you."

　　文章第二部分，根據(jù)第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)，提出建議�？赡苌婕暗饺缦聨追N建議，如：

　　If it's not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.（如果錢(qián)不多的話，可以借給她）

　　If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you'd better suggest her to ask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多錢(qián)的話，你最好建議她去問(wèn)她的父母尋求幫助）

　　If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.（如果你決定把錢(qián)借給她的話，就要信任她，因?yàn)樗�是你的好朋友。�?/p>

　　文章第三部分，根據(jù)第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，談?wù)勛约旱母惺�，其�?shí)，也就是回答"why"，即：為什么要給出如上建議的原因。如：

　　Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友誼和信任比金錢(qián)更重要，如果你的好朋友需要幫助，你應(yīng)該幫助他/她，并且給予信任。）

　　We students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我們學(xué)生沒(méi)有工作，不掙錢(qián)，需要依賴(lài)我們的父母。當(dāng)我們需要用錢(qián)的時(shí)候，問(wèn)父母要總比問(wèn)同學(xué)借要好。同時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該對(duì)父母要保持誠(chéng)實(shí)）

　　2. 邏輯

　　如果考生能夠找全題目要點(diǎn)，并且按照要點(diǎn)所給順序?qū)懴聛?lái)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，那么邏輯應(yīng)該是通順的。因?yàn)槿�文基本是按照如下思路：現(xiàn)身說(shuō)法，對(duì)于對(duì)方所遇到的問(wèn)題表示理解 --- 提出建議 --- 說(shuō)明感受，即說(shuō)明所提建議的原因。其中，可以使用大量的邏輯連詞和狀語(yǔ)從句表示因果、條件、轉(zhuǎn)折等邏輯關(guān)系。

　　3. 語(yǔ)法、亮點(diǎn)

　　根據(jù)題目要求，回信文體形式大體為說(shuō)明文，議論參半，所以下筆前首先確定文章時(shí)態(tài)大體為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。由于文章話題屬于生活化細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題，所以文章內(nèi)容一般不涉及難度過(guò)大的詞或句子，只要句式靈活多變，用詞準(zhǔn)確、豐富，邏輯通順，語(yǔ)法完全正確，多用詞組，向批卷老師呈現(xiàn)出扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)法功底和豐富的詞匯量，也就是文章的亮點(diǎn)所在。

One possible version:

Hi! Alice,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. 

I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend. 

I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.

I hope what I said can help you. 

Yours,

Liu Ming