Question

電視已成為我們生活中的一部分，看電視有好處也有壞處，根據(jù)你自身的體會，給大家提些自己的看法。請根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文：

1. 我們應(yīng)該選擇合適的節(jié)目，比如看紀(jì)錄片可以幫助我們了解許多有關(guān)自然和歷史的知識；

2. 周一至周五我們學(xué)習(xí)很忙，我們最好在周末或假日里看電視；

3. 必須計(jì)劃好自己的時間，試圖在學(xué)習(xí)和看電視之間取得平衡是很重要的；

4. 看電視可以幫助我們放松，同時也能學(xué)到許多有用的知識；

5. 看太多的電視對眼睛不好, 你認(rèn)為……。

注意：1.全文要通順、連貫；

      2. 詞數(shù)80左右；

      3. 對第6要點(diǎn)作1-2句話的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

      Now TV has become necessary in our life. We can get all kinds of information through TV. The world is in front of us. The distance between countries is shortened with the help of TV.

But we should choose the right time and the right programs to watch. From Monday to Friday, we are busy with our study. So we’d better watch TV on the weekend. We should choose the right programs, such as watching a documentary that can help us understand a lot of knowledge about the nature and history; It‘s very important for us to strike a balance between studying and watching TV.

After busy work, we can watch some funny programs to relax. Every day we can watch some interesting programs to make us happy.

Although TV has some benefits, sometimes it has bad influence.  Some students watch TV day and night. It influences their lessons. It’s also bad for their eyes. Some programs are not good for children. So we should choose some good programs to watch especially for children.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意一般現(xiàn)在時的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。