Question

Writing 10(2011 鹽城)

    初中三年的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中，北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的同學(xué)成了與我們 朝夕相處的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人為樂(lè)等優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)給 我們留下了深刻的印象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)課本內(nèi)容及下表提示，用英語(yǔ) 寫一•篇題為“My Friend Daniel”的短文。

注意事項(xiàng)：

1. 詞數(shù):80詞左右(已給出的文章開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) ；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必須包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

        My Friend Daniel

    My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He 

Answer 1

Writing 10

[寫作提示]

1. 審題:本文屬于描寫人的記敘文，基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn):①描寫出Daniel的外貌特征;②Daniel的喜好(喜歡 的和不喜歡的) ；③Daniel的品質(zhì)：善良、樂(lè)于助人、具有創(chuàng)造力；④可 以從Daniel身上學(xué)到什么。

[參考范文]

            My Friend Daniel

    My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He wears glasses.He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports.

    Daniel is helpful and kind. Once he helped an old woman cross the road.He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club. He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition. Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him.

    Daniel is so great that we must learn from him. We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me.