Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

提示：每個人生活中都要面對各種各樣的困難。我們應(yīng)該怎樣緩解自己的壓力呢？請你以“How to Deal with Our Pressure ”為題，根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。

Ways to relax	改變你的想法	想一想你最喜歡的人或事而不是想那些麻煩
	你還可以這樣做	聽音樂、唱歌、鍛煉等，這些都能讓你高興起來
		尋求幫助，和父母、老師或朋友多溝通。
My points	耐心一點(diǎn)。其實(shí)困難也許并不可怕，壓力可能并不嚴(yán)重。說不定誰能幫到你，也說不定等等就好了。相信我們的生活會更美好。

要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)；

2. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個；

3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。

How to Deal with Our Pressure

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Deal with Our Pressure

Everyone may feel disappointed, tired or sad because of difficulties or they are under much pressure. But how can we deal with stress in our life?

Firstly, we should change our mind. We can think about our favorite people or things instead of the troubles. Meanwhile, listening to music, singing songs or taking some exercise can cheer us up. What’s more, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers and communicate more with our friends.

In my opinion, we should be patient enough. Actually the difficulties may not be terrible and the pressure may not be serious. Maybe someone can help us. We just need to wait and our life will be better.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如because of，under much pressure，deal with，change our mind，think about，instead of，listen to music，cheer us up，what’s more，ask for help，communicate with，in my opinion，need to do等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Everyone may feel disappointed, tired or sad because of difficulties or they are under much pressure./ Actually the difficulties may not be terrible and the pressure may not be serious./ We just need to wait and our life will be better.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。