Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）

假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim想了解一下中國(guó)家庭的家規(guī)(family rules)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你家的情況給他寫(xiě)一封回信，給Jim介紹一下你家的家規(guī)和你對(duì)家規(guī)的看法。

1. 對(duì)和朋友相處的規(guī)定

2. 對(duì)寫(xiě)作業(yè)的規(guī)定

3. 對(duì)休息時(shí)間的要求

4. 你的感受及意見(jiàn)

要求：語(yǔ)言合理、語(yǔ)句通順；60詞左右；信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are many rules in my family. My parents are very strict so I have so many family rules.

For example,I can't go out with my friends on school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I think it's necessary.

And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself.

I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I have to be in bed by ten o'clock.

Thanks to these rules.I can keep healthy.But I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock! Students need nine hours sleep!

And I don’t think playing some computer games is bad for us children. So I think the family rules can make some changes.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封回信，要符合信的格式，因?yàn)檫@是給Jim一封回信介紹一下自己家的家規(guī)和自己對(duì)家規(guī)的看法，所以注意使用正確的主語(yǔ)。要注意主謂一致及動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。最后要寫(xiě)出對(duì)家規(guī)的看法。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文使用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如: I can't go out with my friends on school nights. And I must finish my homework in time. I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock等，短文也使用了一些連詞如：but，because和and等。使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化了。