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4．假如你是李明，你的筆友Peter將隨團(tuán)來你校進(jìn)行為期一天的學(xué)習(xí)交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你將以下安排發(fā)郵件告知．

學(xué)校安排上午活動(dòng)	1．meet teachers and students 2．have a Chinese music class 3．learn how to make Chinese paper cut
你安排下午活動(dòng)及理由	…

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括上午的安排，下午的安排及理由；
2．開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，你只需接著寫；
3．詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右．開頭和結(jié)尾部分內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Hi Peter，
Iam writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
In the morning，you are supposed to meet our teachers and schoolmates first and then have a Chinesemusic class．Next，you will be taught how to do Chinese paper cutting．
In the afternoon，I suggest you startby taking a bout trip on the West Lake．You will adire the beautifulsights around the lake．Then you can visit some interesting museums and famous temples to get to know thehistory of the city．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是你的筆友Peter將隨團(tuán)來你校進(jìn)行為期一天的學(xué)習(xí)交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你將安排發(fā)郵件告知．注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)校安排上午活動(dòng)：1）和老師學(xué)生見面2）中文音樂課3）學(xué)怎樣去做中國剪紙
2你安排下午活動(dòng)及理由
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
teach sb sth 教某人某事
decorate sth with sth 用某物裝飾某物
be proud of 以…為自豪
have a great time 玩的開心
【高分句型】
1．In the morning，when you get to our school，you will meet our teachers and students，and they will give you a warm welcome．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
2．In the afternoon，you will watch a play called Tea House．
called Tea House．過去分詞短語做后置定語，修飾paly．

解答 Hi，Peter，
       I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
In the morning，when you get to our school，you will meet our teachers and students，and they will give you a warm welcome．【高分句型】（和老師學(xué)生見面）Next you will have a Chinese music class in the music room．I'm sure you'll like Chinese music．（中文音樂課）Then our teachers will teach you how to make  Chinese paper cut．It is very beautiful．We usually decorate the doors and windows with them on Spring Festival．（學(xué)怎樣去做中國剪紙）
In the afternoon，you will watch a play called Tea House．【高分句型】It was written by Lao She．I think you will like it．（看話�。㏕hen you will enjoy Beijing Opera at the theater near our school．（看京劇）We Chinese people are all proud of Beijing Opera．（理由）Have you ever heard of it before？I'm sure you will have a great time in China．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．