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5．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter的學(xué)校網(wǎng)站"中國(guó)文化"欄目擬刊登中國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗及中學(xué)生生活的短文．近期Peter給你寫了e-mail約稿．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回一封郵件．
1．對(duì)該欄目的評(píng)價(jià)；
2．介紹中國(guó)的中秋節(jié)；
3．你的建議和希望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm very happy to receive you e-mail．                                   
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作為，是應(yīng)用文，要求從三方面給英國(guó)筆友Peter回復(fù)一封郵件，應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1．內(nèi)容包括三個(gè)方面：對(duì)該欄目的評(píng)價(jià)，關(guān)于中秋節(jié)的介紹和建議及希望；2．文章是對(duì)現(xiàn)在情況的描述，則應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，建議和希望可用一般將來時(shí)；3．人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主；4．詞數(shù)100左右，需適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
寫作常用短語(yǔ)句型：
be intersted in sth．表示對(duì)某事感興趣
successful 成功的
Because it is helpful for foreigners to understand more Chinese culture and customs．因?yàn)檫@對(duì)外國(guó)人更加了解中國(guó)文化和習(xí)俗是非常有幫助的．
lunar calendar 農(nóng)歷
It is one of the most important festivals in China．它是中國(guó)最重要的節(jié)日之一．
All the family get together for a big dinner that day．那天所有的家庭都會(huì)聚在一起共進(jìn)晚餐．
We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion．我們認(rèn)為滿月是團(tuán)圓的象征．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm very happy to receive your e-mail．I am interested in the programm．I think the programm is very successful because it is very helpful for foreigners to understand more Chinese culture and custmos．Now let me tell you something about Mid-Autumn Festival in China．
Mid-Autumn Festival is on August 15^th of the lunar calendar．It's one of the most important festivals in China．All the family members get together for a big dinner that day．We usually eat mooncakes while watching the moon at night．We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion．
I think you can show more pictures and videos about Mid-Autumn Festival on your programm．I hope that your programm will be more and more popular．
Yours
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱作文，大綱及相關(guān)要求已給出，要求考生認(rèn)真審題，理解題意，從三方面去回復(fù)郵件，且每一方面需要增加適當(dāng)細(xì)節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)飽滿．其次，文章應(yīng)語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)句通順，并多使用寫作常用短語(yǔ)及句型，注意句型的變換，使文章更加流暢．最后寫完作文后注意檢查單詞的正確書寫、大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)等細(xì)節(jié)問題．