Question

上個(gè)月你去了家鄉(xiāng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下提示寫一篇題為”A visit to my hometown”的短文，內(nèi)容提示：
你的家鄉(xiāng)過去是一個(gè)安靜小城鎮(zhèn)，青山環(huán)抱，空氣清新，人們騎自行車或步行去購(gòu)物，這些年改變了許多。家鄉(xiāng)的變化帶來(lái)了許多好處，但是也帶來(lái)了許多問題，環(huán)境沒有以前好了，房?jī)r(jià)太高，不少人買不起房子。相信……。
注意：1、短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2、詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，省略號(hào)部分各用2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Last month I went to my hometown.It used to be a quiet small town._________________

Answer 1

One possible version:
Last month I went to my hometown. It used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills around and the was fresh air. People went shopping by bike or on foot. It has changed a lot these years. There are many broad roads and tall buildings. Many people has bought cars and moved into the new flats. Many buses pass there. Many people go to the factory to work. The changes have brought many advantages, but they also cause lots of problems. The environment is not as good as before. The price of the house is too high; many people can’t afford to buy the houses. I believe the government will take action to solve the problems. People will live a better life.

這是一篇給材料作文要求寫一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)從過去到現(xiàn)在發(fā)生的一些變化。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。由于是介紹過去到現(xiàn)在的變化，故應(yīng)特別注意時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用，介紹過去一般用過去時(shí)態(tài)，介紹現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，展望將來(lái)則用將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中注意表達(dá)的先后順序，語(yǔ)義的 連貫性，注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的慣用句式，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用，不犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。短文結(jié)尾要根據(jù)自己的看法，發(fā)表一點(diǎn)對(duì)于將來(lái)的展望，最少要寫兩句話，注意將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。寫好后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。