Question

請根據(jù)提示，以 Computers 為題寫一篇文章
1. 電腦工作和余暇生活中的重要性。
2.電腦在許多方面的使用。(in factories，in hospitals,…….)
3.電腦的優(yōu)缺點
要求: 1.文章必須包括以上主要內容和提示詞，可以適當增加細節(jié)，使內容連貫；
2.80詞左右。

Answer 1

Computers  
Computers have become very important in many areas of work and leisure.
Advantage: In space, computers help astronauts control the speed and direction of a spaceship. Doctors can find diseases easily and solve other problems. In factories, robots controlled by computers can do work that is dangerous to humans. In business, computers are used to place and cancel orders. At home, people can use them to play games, watch movies, do shopping and business, communicate by sending e-mails and chatting online.
Disadvantages: If we work computers too long, we may get headaches or sore eyes. We won’t have enough time to study or exercise. Not everything we read on the Internet is ture or good for us
In short, computer helps us at work and at home, but they must be used properly.

這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇短文介紹電腦。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點。通過閱讀材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。