Question

某英文報以An Unforgettable Day (《難忘的一天》) 為題，面向中學(xué)生開展征文活動，請你寫一篇短文參加此次活動。
內(nèi)容包括：
1、哪一天讓你感到難忘；
2、什么事（開心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的，……）讓你感到那天難忘；
3、那一天你經(jīng)歷了什么；
4、那天的經(jīng)歷對你有什么影響或者你有什么感受。
要求：
1、80-100 詞；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。

Answer 1

A possible version:
An Unforgettable Day
I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject.
After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party.
I’ll never forget that day.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求根據(jù)自己的回憶以一篇敘事性短文,記述自己難忘的一件事情。動筆前先要認真閱讀寫作提示,注意從四個方面進行敘述。由于是回憶性短文，故用過去時態(tài)較多，注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的搭配。寫作中選取自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)同寫，注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系,不要犯語法書寫的低級錯誤。