Question

書面表達 （15 分）

(A)按下列表格填空，至少5句。（5分）

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails

(B)請根據(jù)上面表格提示以How to Keep Healthy為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。（10分）

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

(A)

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails
go to bed early	throw litter about
Do more exercise	smoke
eat healthy food	stay up

(B)

　How to keep healthy

　If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food--more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails, stay up and smoke etc. It’s also very important.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格式開放作文。本文要求按照所給的題目完成表格中的內(nèi)容的填寫，并根據(jù)所填表格中的信息完成這篇關(guān)于健康習(xí)慣的作文，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含填寫表格然后在寫作中涉及到保持健康的好的和不好的習(xí)慣等幾個方面進行陳述，表達出個人的觀點等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文完成了對表格的填寫并且后面的作文內(nèi)容和表格中的信息是相吻合的，在寫作中作者簡明、扼要地闡明了自己的見解，并包含了保持健康的幾個好的習(xí)慣和應(yīng)該戒除掉的幾個壞習(xí)慣等。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含條件狀語從句的準確使用為文章增色不少。如If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit.，If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once.，sleep at least eight hours every day，throw litter about，學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：表格作文。