Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（10分）

假設(shè)Becky是你最好的朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息，寫一篇短文介紹一下Becky。要求:70詞左右。

Becky：14歲,來(lái)自美國(guó)。 愛(ài)好：打籃球和彈鋼琴。 到校時(shí)間：早上7:40 。

到校方式：乘公共汽車 。 家規(guī)：父母要求嚴(yán)格，放學(xué)回家做作業(yè)，飯后洗餐具。

最喜愛(ài)的動(dòng)物：狗，友好又有趣。看這張照片，她正在和狗一起玩。

My best friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My best friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Becky. She is fourteen years old. She is from the United States. She likes playing basketball and playing the piano. She gets to school at 7:40a.m. It takes her about half an hour to take the bus to the school. Her parents are strict with her. She has to go home to do homework after school. After dinner, she has to do the dishes. Her favorite animal is dogs. Because she thinks it is friendly and interesting. Look at this photo, and she is playing with a dog.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友Becky。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Her name is…，She is…, It takes sb time to do sth, She has to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整地表達(dá)出提綱中所要求的內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹她的年齡，國(guó)籍，喜好，學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，最后介紹她的一張照片。此處be from, play basketball, play the piano, take the bus, be strict with, do the dishes等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。