Question

20．在你的學(xué)校生活中，你經(jīng)歷過(guò)很多次背誦、課堂答問(wèn)、各種考試和比賽（學(xué)科比賽、體育比賽、文藝比賽、演講比賽、航模比賽…）所有這些當(dāng)中，你最難忘的是哪一次？為什么？這種經(jīng)歷帶給你什么啟示？請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，向?qū)W校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿．
注意：（1）60詞左右；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息．
An Unforgettable English Speech Contest
During my middle school study，I have taken part in many matches，but I never forget an English speech contest．
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．Many excellent students were in our class．Besides me，several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest．Luckily，the English teacher asked me to take it．I was worried about it very much．I was eager to get it，but I was afraid to fail．With the help of my English teacher and more than a week's hard work，I won the first in our school．
After that I worked harder．I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it．Where there is a will，there is a way．Do you think so？（．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勛铍y忘的是哪一次經(jīng)歷？為什么？這種經(jīng)歷帶給你什么啟示？．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1最難忘的是哪一次經(jīng)歷
2為什么
3這種經(jīng)歷帶給你什么啟示
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take part in 參加
put up 舉起
ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
be worried about 擔(dān)心
be eager to do sth 渴望做某事
with the help of sb 在某人的幫助下

【高分句型】
1．①When the teacher told us②there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②told后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
2．I think ①I(mǎi) can succeed②if I try my best to do it．
①think后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．try one's best to do sth 經(jīng)歷做某事．
3．Where there is a will，there is a way．
有志者事竟成，諺語(yǔ)的使用．

解答 An Unforgettable English Speech Contest
During my middle school study，I have taken part in many matches，but I never forget an English speech contest．（最難忘的是一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)演講比賽）
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．【高分句型】Many excellent students were in our class．Besides me，several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest．Luckily，the English teacher asked me to take it．I was worried about it very much．I was eager to get it，but I was afraid to fail．With the help of my English teacher and more than a week's hard work，I won the first in our school．（為什么）
After that I worked harder．I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it．【高分句型】Where there is a will，there is a way．【高分句型】Do you think so？（這種經(jīng)歷帶給你什么啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．