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【題目】文段表達

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入總詞數(shù)。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

66.假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Jim要來北京參加交換生活動。他寫郵件向你了解中國的禮儀，你們通常在家和學校怎么做，以及與人融洽相處最重要的是什么。請你根據(jù)他的問題回復郵件。

提示詞語：shake hands，eat first，quite，respect，friendly

1.What are you supposed to do when you meet someone for the first time?What should you do when older people are at the dinner table?

2. What do you usually do to be polite at home and at school?

3. What is the most important to get along with in China?

To Jim

From Li Hua

Subject Good manners

Hi! Tom，

I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to Beijing.

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I hope you will enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi !Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing. In China, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time. And we are not supposed to eat first when older people are at the table.

For students, it is necessary to be polite to others. At home, we never start talking until our parents finish their words. At school, greeting teachers and schoolmates is considered polite behavior. We always stand up when we talk to our teachers. Besides, when we are in public places like museums or libraries, it’s important to keep quiet.

In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.

I hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and，以及頻度副詞never，always等為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。