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16．隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，物質(zhì)豐富，食品浪費(fèi)時間現(xiàn)象越來越嚴(yán)重．據(jù)報道，中國人每年廣糧食足以養(yǎng)活全球2億人．請結(jié)合你在學(xué)校看到的食品浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，我們�?yīng)該怎樣踐行勤儉節(jié)約，反對鋪張浪費(fèi)"．文章開頭已給出．
要點(diǎn)提示：1．超量取用食物中毒 2．隨意丟棄剩飯剩菜 3．同學(xué)之間頻繁互相宴請
寫作要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名．   2．寫作中須使用要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容
3．提出合理化建議（至少兩點(diǎn)） 4．不得抄襲試題內(nèi)容，否則計零分
5．詞數(shù)控制在50-100詞之內(nèi)（不含文章開頭已給句子所含詞數(shù)
參考詞匯：eat up，throw away，start a habit of，in one's opinion，get-together，for example
Nowadays in china，more foods are produced and the people's life improves most．However，fewer people realize it is necessary to save foods，even in our school，food wasting is often seen．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．以"節(jié)約糧食"為題．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從兩個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：學(xué)校里存在的食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象和為食物節(jié)約提出合理建議．
重點(diǎn)短語：
1．food wasting 食物浪費(fèi)
2．do harm to 對…造成損害
3．eat up all the food 吃光所有的食物
4．order the food 點(diǎn)餐
5．healthy enough 足夠健康
高分句型：
1．However，fewer people realize it is necessary to save foods．然而，很少有人認(rèn)識到節(jié)約食物的必要性．賓語從句用的句式：It's+形容詞+to do sth．
2．Eating too much does harm to our health．吃得太多會損害我們的健康．動名詞作主語
3．To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．為了節(jié)約食物，我們不應(yīng)該浪費(fèi)．動詞不定式表目的．

解答 Nowadays in china，more foods are produced and the people's life improves most．However，fewer people realize it is necessary to save foods【高分句型】，even in our school，food wasting is often seen．Eating too much does harm to our health【高分句型】．Many student throw food everywhere，and some students have birthday parties in turns．（學(xué)校存在的食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象）
To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．【高分句型】We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough to eat．We'd better not eat in small restaurants．The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough．We'd better eat at school or at home if we have time．（反對浪費(fèi)的合理化建議）
I hope we can star now．Save food，save our lives．

點(diǎn)評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．