Question

【題目】學(xué)校“英語文化節(jié)系列活動之英語寫作競賽”即將舉行，要求大家積極投稿，以“My Hometown”為題，結(jié)合要點，完成作文。

要求：1.書寫規(guī)范 2.條理清楚 3.包含所有要點 ，不少于80詞。

Para. 1	Location	靠近河邊的小鎮(zhèn)，離阜寧中心不遠(yuǎn)，乘公交車大約20分鐘。
Para. 2	Neighbors	有二百多戶人家，相處友好，工程師分享……，醫(yī)生幫助處理……，人們喜歡……
Para. 3	My home	那棟兩層的樓房就是我的家，周圍鮮花盛開，綠樹成蔭，早晨能……，我最喜歡的地方是……因為……
Para.4	你對家鄉(xiāng)的評價，并暢想未來。

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

My Hometown

Welcome to my hometown! It is a small town near a river. It’s not far from the center of Funing city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There’re about 200 families. All the villagers get on well with each other, they are friendly and help each other. There are many volunteers in my neighborhood. Some of them are doctors, so they can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong with your things , the engineers here can help you fix them. Look, that building with two floors is my home. There are many flowers and trees around it, My favorite place is the balcony, because I can play with my friends there happily.

My hometown is peaceful and beautiful. I love it very much! I hope my hometown will be better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我夢想的家。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，要注意句子的主語的變化及主謂一致的問題。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is ...There are...及I hope ....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要暢想未來。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的地理位置。接下來介紹鄰居及自己的家，最后對家鄉(xiāng)的評價，并暢想未來。短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩如：It’s not far from the center of Funing city. All the villagers get on well with each other, I hope my hometown will be better.等，這里用了連詞and和that，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜。