Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。（10分）

以My pen pal(我的筆友)為題寫(xiě)一篇60個(gè)字左右的小短文

姓名	Lisa	年齡	13
籍貫	美國(guó) 紐約 (New York)	學(xué)校	No. 3 Middle School
外貌	金黃色長(zhǎng)卷發(fā)， 中等身材，有點(diǎn)胖
愛(ài)好	喜歡穿藍(lán)色衣服，喜歡讀書(shū)，下棋，游泳

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Answer 1

【答案】

My pen pal

I have a pen pal. She is Lisa. She comes from the USA. She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York. She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair. But she is a little fat. She wants to be thin. She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue. She likes reading books, playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time. She is good at her subjects. She likes helping her classmate. Both her classmates and teachers like her very much. She has many frineds. Do you want to be her pen pal?

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫(xiě)作的提綱，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair. But she is a little fat. She wants to be thin. She is always in blue because her f avorite color is blue. She likes reading books, playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time.等等。