Question

【題目】 熬過漫長的寒假,我們終于回到了美麗的校園。大多數(shù)同學(xué)的心情可能是既激動又惶恐。擔(dān)心自己與同學(xué)們相處不好;擔(dān)心新學(xué)期學(xué)習(xí)成績不理想等等。假如你是李華，你的好友李明向你傾訴了，上述煩惱。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，給他回一封郵件，幫助解決他的煩惱。

提示: 1.保持好心情

2.待人友善，互幫互助，多與同學(xué)們溝通交流

3.努力學(xué)習(xí)，對自己充滿信心

4.遇到困難，主動向老師和同學(xué)們需求幫助

Dear Li Ming,

How are you? Thank you for your letter.

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Yours,

Li Hua.

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Li Ming,

How are you? Thank you for your letter.　I’m sorry to hear that you have a lot of worries. You're worried that you don't get along well with your classmate. You're worried about not getting good grades in the new semester. In fact, you don't have to feel anxious. I have some suggestions that may help you.

First of all, keep a good mood. People like to be with happy people. Secondly, be friendly to others, help each other, and communicate with students more. Thirdly, you should study hard and be confident in yourself. When you're in trouble, you should ask teachers and students for help initiatively.

If you do this, I think you'll feel better soon.

Yours,

　　　Li Hua.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，是書信作文，寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭。認(rèn)真閱讀提示要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段敘述“李明遇到的困擾”，第二段針對問題給出建議；第三段概括總結(jié)。寫作時(shí)，注意表達(dá)的條理性，連貫性，語法，單詞拼寫等。