Question

一家知名外資企業(yè)準(zhǔn)備與當(dāng)?shù)卣�府合作修建一所�?guó)際學(xué)校。為了建好、辦好學(xué)校，該企業(yè)總裁Mr. White廣泛征求學(xué)生意見(jiàn)，并公開(kāi)了他的郵箱地址。請(qǐng)你以“周杉”的名義給他寫(xiě)一封E-mail，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh及理由。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1.學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(如:教室、操場(chǎng)……)；
2. 特色課程（如：網(wǎng)球）鋼琴……）；
3. ……
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear you’ll build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice.          
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
I hope I can enter the school.
Sincerely yours,
Zhou Shan

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mr. White,[
I’m glad to hear you’ll build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in, modern libraries to open up their eyes, large playground to play different kinds of sports on. The school may provide students with some special courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely. It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience.
I hope I can enter the school.
Sincerely yours,
Zhou Shan[

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