Question

暑假即將來(lái)臨，某校學(xué)生會(huì)打算在假期舉行為貧困地區(qū)和受災(zāi)地區(qū)的孩子們奉獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)，號(hào)召同學(xué)們用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉獻(xiàn)自己的愛(ài)心。
要求：
1、文中應(yīng)包含：至少兩種幫助方式：這樣做的目的和意義。
2、字?jǐn)?shù)80～800；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
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Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
As students, we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes and toys . We can also donate some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world. We may raise money for charity by collecting used bottled, plastics, waste paper and so on , or by doing part-time jobs, such as, handing out advertisements, selling newspapers and so on. Making pen pals with them will be a better way to help deal with problems in their study.
The more we devote/do, the better world would be!
Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

解析試題分析：本題是寫(xiě)一篇給貧窮或受災(zāi)地區(qū)奉獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心的倡議書(shū)，根據(jù)題目要求我們從我們的現(xiàn)狀，貧窮地區(qū)孩子們的現(xiàn)狀，我們?nèi)绾翁峁�幫助，為什么提供幫助，以及幫助的意義等方面去寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)我們同時(shí)要注意倡議書(shū)格式，以及正確句式的使用。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注重語(yǔ)言的連貫性和準(zhǔn)確性。
考點(diǎn)：獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心倡議書(shū)的寫(xiě)法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)倡議書(shū)時(shí)，我們要注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的格式，同時(shí)我們要明確倡議的內(nèi)容，原因和意義，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注重句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的正確使用，注重語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性，不要使用錯(cuò)詞或錯(cuò)句，提高寫(xiě)作的質(zhì)量。