Question

上了九年級(jí)后你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了哪些困難?你是如何處理這些問(wèn)題的?你今后準(zhǔn)備怎么辦?請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格提示寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勥@些方面。開(kāi)頭已給,不記入詞數(shù)100-120個(gè)詞左右。

問(wèn)題	過(guò)去	有很多空閑的時(shí)間 作業(yè)很少 ...
現(xiàn)在	很忙 不被允許做… ...
解決方法	向...請(qǐng)求幫助 通過(guò)…學(xué)習(xí)
計(jì)劃	打算…

提示詞：used to ,free time, not be allowed to ,ask... for help,

My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine.________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine. I used to have a lot of free time before. I had time to do things that I liked to do, such as playing football with my friends, going to the movie and so on. And I had little homework to do. So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class. But all these have changed. Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework. In order to study well, I am not allowed to go to the movie, or to read novels.

I think I need to turn to my teachers for help. They can give me some useful advice. In the future, I think I should plan my time properly. I must balance the study and my hobbies.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。材料中已經(jīng)明確了寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。另外，句子的表達(dá)要清晰準(zhǔn)確，句子間的邏輯要清楚。這篇作文中會(huì)涉及到不同的時(shí)間，所以一定要注意時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)明確，表達(dá)通順流暢。文中使用了很多好的短語(yǔ)和復(fù)雜的句式。如：used to過(guò)去常常；go to the movie看電影；and so on等等； in order to為了；turn to…for help向某人求助； in the future將來(lái)。I had time to do things that I liked to do, such as playing football with my friends, going to the movie and so on.我有時(shí)間去做我喜歡的事情，例如和朋友踢足球，看電影等等；that后面引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework.現(xiàn)在我太忙了以至于除了做作業(yè)就沒(méi)有時(shí)間做其他事情了。So….that…如此……以至于……,except除了。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。