Question

6．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"A page from my diary during the National Holiday"．（以"國慶假日期間的一則日記"為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Writing about something interesting what you saw，heard or met during the National Holiday．
Suggested questions：
1What interesting things did you see，hear or meet？
2When and where did you see，hear or meet？
3What do you think of it？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Every morning I had a swim with my dad in the water，which is very interesting．每天早上我和爸爸一起在水里游泳，這很有趣．which 為關(guān)系代詞，引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．
句型二：We played so happily that I didn't want to come back．我們玩得很開心，我不想回來．句中含有 so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)，意為"那么/如此…以致"． that 為連詞，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果或目的狀語從句．

解答 October 18，2011 Friday                                                               
Sunny
    How is your National Day？Do you have a good time？Where have you been these days？I had a nice  National Day！
    On September 29th，my parents and I flew to the beach in Dalian．It's so beautiful there that many people from all over the world are taking their vacations．Every morning I had a swim with my dad in the water，which is very interesting【高分句型一】．In the afternoon，I often go shopping with my mum．Sometimes we went fishing．
    Also，we visited the places of interest in Dalian．We played so happily that I didn't want to come back【高分句型二】．

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時(shí)需要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，所以平時(shí)應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．