Question

假設(shè)你是王芬，段考后你將作為優(yōu)秀學(xué)生代表在家長(zhǎng)會(huì)上發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的幾點(diǎn)寫(xiě)出你的演講稿，給同學(xué)和家長(zhǎng)們一些好的建議。（不少于60詞）

要點(diǎn)提示：1. 學(xué)生應(yīng)制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃

2. 多讀有益的書(shū)，多參加活動(dòng)；少玩游戲，看電視

3. 和老師同學(xué)和睦相處

4. 回家多和父母溝通，幫忙做家務(wù)

5. 父母不要給孩子太大壓力。

要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校及班級(jí)。

Hello, everyone, I am Wang Fen. I’m very glad to talk with you.

 

 

 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone, I am Wang Fen. I’m very glad to talk with you。Here are some ways of learning well。First，t is very important and necessary for us to make a good study plan. It's generally considered that reading do a lot of benefit to our students.Not only can it make our after-school life more meaningful and corlourful. You should participate in all kinds of social activities,such as going to parties and dancing balls,and we should spend less time on computer games and TV,At school,we get along well with our teachers and classmates.After school,we communicate with our parents ,and help them with the housework.And the pparents shouln’t push the children hard.

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹學(xué)習(xí)的建議。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如t is very important and necessary for us to make a good study plan。you should participate in all kinds of social activities,such as going to parties and dancing balls,.等。At school等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。