Question

9．根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60----80詞的短文，所給提示詞語(yǔ)供選用．
地球上有近二分之一的人口缺乏足夠的飲用水．發(fā)現(xiàn)并制止水的浪費(fèi)是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任．請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)述身邊是否有浪費(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象，是如何浪費(fèi)的并對(duì)此談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�提示詞語(yǔ)：
one half of the world's population，water wasting，shower，run，speed，
tap （水龍頭）
Save  Water
Nowadays nearly one half of the world's population doesn't have enough water．But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．For example，when we have showers，we often let it run at full speed．After we wash something at home，we often throw the water away．When something is wrong with a tap，no one repair it in time．Water will come out of it．What a pity!
I think we'll try and change our habits to save every drop of water for future．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．但是在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活的許多方面浪費(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象隨處可見．
含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，其結(jié)構(gòu)為情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過去分詞
高分句型二：
①For example，②when we have shower，we often let it run at full speed例如當(dāng)我們洗淋浴時(shí)，我們經(jīng)常把水開到最大．
①for example 例如
②when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Nowadays nearly one half of the world's population doesn't have enough water．【地球上有近二分之一的人口缺乏足夠的飲用水】But water wasting can be found in many ways in our daily life．【高分句型一】For example，when we have showers，we often let it run at full speed．【高分句型二】After we wash something at home，we often throw the water away．When something is wrong with a tap，no one repair it in time．Water will come out of it．What a pity!【身邊浪費(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象】
     I think we'll tryand change our habits to save every drop of water for future【表達(dá)自己的看法】

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