Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是Anna，你的好友Lisa最近很苦惱，因?yàn)樗�越�?lái)越胖，而且感覺(jué)自己很不健康。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)她的情況，給她寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的信提一些合理的建議吧。（短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

提示：1．不要吃太多甜食和快餐，它們對(duì)身體不好，而且容易導(dǎo)致發(fā)胖；

2．平時(shí)多鍛煉，比如：晨跑、游泳；

3．早睡，確保睡眠質(zhì)量;

4. …(至少再加一條自己建議)

Dear Lisa,

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Anna

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lisa,

I’m sorry to know that you are worried these days. I hope I can help you and here is my advice.

You'd better not eat too much sweet food or fast food. They are not good for our health and can help put on weight. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. And we should do lots of exercise, such as running in the morning, swimming and so on. Also, we have to go to bed early and make sure to have a good sleep. In fact, we aren't supposed to pay much attention to our build but our health. We should be happy as long as we are healthy.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Anna

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封建議信，首先要注意書(shū)信的格式；同時(shí)要注意給朋友提建議時(shí)的語(yǔ)氣。作為一篇提綱作文，要包含提示中的所有要點(diǎn)：注意飲食、堅(jiān)持鍛煉、注意休息等等方面進(jìn)行建議。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，用第一、二人稱(chēng)形式�？梢杂胹hould，can，had better等等情態(tài)動(dòng)詞幫助表情達(dá)意。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本范文第一段首先對(duì)好友的現(xiàn)狀表示同情，然后直接引入主題：以下是我?guī)椭�你的建議。語(yǔ)言使用準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直奔主題。第二段從注意飲食、堅(jiān)持鍛煉、注意休息等等方面進(jìn)行建議，符合提示要求，包含了提示的所有要點(diǎn)。中心突出。其中的had better, be good for, eat lots of, such as, make sure, in fact, pay attention to, as long as等等短語(yǔ)、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確，使短文更加具體生動(dòng)。