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提示：每個(gè)人都會(huì)遇到許多人和事，都會(huì)或多或少對(duì)你產(chǎn)生影響，使你感悟，令你深思。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的初中生活和真實(shí)感受，以“A good teacher in my eyes”為題寫(xiě)一英語(yǔ)篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50-60個(gè)。

要求：1.緊扣主題，語(yǔ)言通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。

2.文中不得到出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名及地名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A good teacher in my eyes

I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher. She is a woman of medium height. She is in her thirties. Her name is Nancy.

I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons. To start with, she spent a lot of her spare time talking with us, helping us with problems in study and personal life. Second, the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun. I enjoy every minute of her lesson. And third, Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever. Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，以“我眼中的好老師”為題寫(xiě)一篇作文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的完整性，在寫(xiě)人記事時(shí)都要表達(dá)清晰，邏輯思維嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。尤其要主語(yǔ)主謂一致，在使用不同的時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)動(dòng)詞要發(fā)生變化。句子之間注意銜接。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清晰，用了很多比較復(fù)雜的詞匯和句子。例如：I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher.我很幸運(yùn)遇到了很多好老師，其中印象最深的是我的引語(yǔ)老師。 among whom引導(dǎo)是個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，其中又用了形容詞最高級(jí)。I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons我把nancy認(rèn)為是好老師有三個(gè)原因；Refard….as….把…認(rèn)為…。還有spend time doing sth.花時(shí)間做……; no…but….不是…而是…；等等。另外文章陳述三個(gè)理由，用了To start with；Second；And third使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰明了。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。