Question

【題目】假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談談你的看法并給他提一些具體的建議。

要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱等信息。

3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.

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Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.

Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因寫清楚，并提出中肯的建議，表達出對父親的體貼與關愛，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結構緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。