Question

14．請仔細觀察以下三幅圖片的內(nèi)容，并想象第四幅圖片可能的發(fā)展，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文．

Tom's mother Mary runs a noodle restaurant．One afternoon，Tom was doing his homework on the counter in the restaurant when a customer came for a bowl of noodles，Obviously he was in a hurry for he left his bag behind as he left the train station．
Tom noticed the bag．Opening the bag，to their surprise，they found thatit was full of cash in bundles．They had only seen criminals do that making illegal deals on TV．
At the train station，our hasty customer was panic-stricken．His face covered with sweat，he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money．
Finally he traced back to Mary's noodle restaurant．The minute be stepped in，he saw cops waiting him at the counter．Damn，He turned around to run，but it was too late．The cops arrested him，Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖寫作，有三幅連環(huán)圖片，并要求想象第四幅圖片可能的發(fā)展，寫出一個涵蓋連環(huán)圖片內(nèi)容并有完整結(jié)局的故事．1．認真讀圖，2．初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)．3．連詞成句，然后再連句成文．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容．4．反復審核，修改錯誤．5．注意所給的漢語提示．
高分句型：
①His face covered with sweat，he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money．他的臉上滿是汗水，他在努力地回憶他把錢放在了哪里．cover with 覆蓋著…，try to do sth嘗試做某事；where he had left his bag of money在句子中作recall的賓語，構(gòu)成賓語從句．
②Opening  the bag，to their surprise，they found that it was full of cash in bundles．打開袋子，令他們驚訝的是，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)里面裝滿一捆捆的現(xiàn)金．to one's surprise令某人驚訝的是；they found 后面跟的是that引導的賓語從句； be full of 裝滿．

解答 Tom's  mother Mary runs a noodle restaurant．One afternoon，Tom was doing his homework on the counter of the restaurant when a customer came for a bowl of noodles，Obviously he was in a hurry，he left his bag behind as he left the train station．（介紹事情的起因）
Tom noticed the bag．Opening  the bag，to their surprise，they found that it was full of cash in bundles（高分句型）．They had only seen criminals do that making illegal deals on TV．（Tom發(fā)現(xiàn)了包并打開包查看一下）
At the train station，our hasty customer was panic-stricken．His face covered with sweat，he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money（高分句型）．（介紹誰丟失了包）
Finally he traced back to Mary's  noodle restaurant．The minute be stepped in，he saw cops waiting him at the counter．He turned around to run，but it was too late．The cops arrested him，Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for．（介紹事情的結(jié)果）

點評 書寫圖畫作文時，要注意看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息．在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)．然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來．串連時，要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然．