Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。

學(xué)會(huì)分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。

要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于 80；

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】It's very important to learn to share with each other.I have many things to share in different ways.For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ，email which are widely used.Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.

Emily was lonely and unhappy.Once I found her crying alone for some reasons.It made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her up.At first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after class.When we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with her.As time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with me.Now we are good friends.

In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.

【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。