Question

11．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)好友Daniel想了解你的英語(yǔ)考試情況、暑期安排和對(duì)新學(xué)校生活的期待．請(qǐng)根據(jù)Daniel電子郵件的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封回信．

From：Daniel@wde．a(chǎn)c．us

Hi， How are you？I know you're busy with your English exam right now．How is it？Anyway，it'll be all over soon．What are you going to do during the summer vacation？What do you look forward to about your new school life？Please e-mail me and let me know． Daniel

要求：
1文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

From：Li Hua@163．com

Hi， Glad to hear from you!                                                Hope you'll have a nice time! Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】I did well in English exam because English is my favourite subject我英語(yǔ)考試很好因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)是我最喜歡的科目．because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，不能與so連用．
【高分句型二】I also believe ①I will ②make great progress③if I④try my best in my new school我也相信在新的學(xué)校如果我努力我就會(huì)取得進(jìn)步．
①believe后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②make progress取得進(jìn)步．
③if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
④try one's best to do sth盡力做某事．

解答 Hi，
Glad to hear from you!I did well in English exam because English is my favourite subject．【高分句型一】（英語(yǔ)成績(jī)很好）Anyway，I will be free after the exam．I will travel to Beijing with my parents．I also plan to work as a volunteer in my community．Besides，I will probably visit my grandparents in the countryside during the summer vacation．（暑假做什么）I am looking forward to my new school life．I hope my new school has many different kinds of clubs．I also believe I will make great progress if I try my best in my new school．【高分句型二】（新的學(xué)習(xí)生活的期待）
Hope you'll have a nice time!
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語(yǔ)的影響，要用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)法等問(wèn)題，用好簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句．可以用一些高級(jí)詞匯．還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)．