Question

9．有些同學(xué)常因作弊而被通報(bào)批評(píng)，請(qǐng)針對(duì)這種不良行為結(jié)合下面圖片內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，在英語(yǔ)課上進(jìn)行交流，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh．
注意：（1）文章必須包括圖片中的信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
（2）分析作弊的原因，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，提出建議，至少兩條．
（3）詞數(shù)：80～100．
（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
短文首句：Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．
參考詞匯：批評(píng) criticize作弊 cheat
In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort他們真的喜歡因?yàn)樗麄兿胍�不通過(guò)努力獲得好成績(jī)．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study我們應(yīng)該意識(shí)到考試作弊對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)不利．
realize后是that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．（描述圖片）They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．【高分句型一】Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．（作弊的原因）We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，【高分句型二】and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．（看法，提出建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．