Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（20%）

以前，你英語(yǔ)成績(jī)不好。你害怕英語(yǔ)，上課聽(tīng)不懂老師說(shuō)的，經(jīng)常犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不敢用英語(yǔ)和他人交流�，F(xiàn)在，你上課記筆記，常常聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)磁帶，喜歡唱英文歌曲。覺(jué)得英語(yǔ)很簡(jiǎn)單。你的朋友李濤在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你自身的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀愕母惺埽�并給李濤以學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的建議。80-100詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾以給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear LI Tao,

Thank you for your last letter. I know that ___________________________________

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Yours Wang Bo

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Tao,

Thank you for your last letter. I know that you want some advice about English.Before, my English was not good. I was afraid of English, I couldn’t understand the teacher in class.And I often made mistakes in grammar.I didn’t use English to talk with other people. Now, I take notes in class, and I often listen to English tapes, sing English songs. I think English is very simple.You should listen to the teacher carefully in class.You should talk with classmates in English as much as possible.I hope you can improve your English soon.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如Now, I take notes in class, and I often listen to English tapes, sing English songs. I think English is very simple.You should listen to the teacher carefully in class.You should talk with classmates in English as much as possible.等等。