Question

18．今年春節(jié)晚會上，很多人加入了搶紅包游戲活動，但也有人表示擔憂．假如你叫李華，你班最近開展了一個有關搶紅包游戲活動的調(diào)查．請你用英文給學校校刊《英語園地》寫一封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談談你的觀點．

70%學生參加搶紅包游戲活動
75%學生表示贊成	1．帶來更多樂趣 2．結(jié)識更多的朋友 3．…
25%學生表示擔憂	1．花費太多的時間 2．和家人交流少 3．…
你的觀點…	…

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱；
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)：80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：搶紅包grabbing red packets
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．
About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹搶紅包游戲的調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談談你的觀點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1 70%學生參加搶紅包游戲活動
2 75%學生表示贊成：帶來更多樂趣；結(jié)識更多的朋友
3.25%學生表示擔憂：花費太多的時間；和家人交流少
4．我的觀點
常用到的重點短語：
take part in 參加
make friends 交朋友
be worried about 擔心
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
【高分句型】
1．About 75% of them think①it can bring them more fun ②and they can make more friends．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句
②and連接兩個句子．make friends 交朋友
2．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．
moreover此外，引出下一個觀點
3．I think ①this game is really exciting，②but we should spend more time communicating with our family members
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句
②but但是，表轉(zhuǎn)折．
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事

解答 Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．（70%學生參加搶紅包游戲活動）About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．【高分句型】However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．【高分句型】As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．【高分句型】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 本圖表所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并需有適當發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當?shù)氖褂觅e語從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語法或詞匯的錯誤．