Question

【題目】書面表達。

請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇60-80詞的短文。要點如下：

你的朋友Jack 長時間玩電腦游戲；

他現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常頭痛，眼睛不舒服，后背及頸酸痛，并且睡不好覺；

請你從睡眠，運動，飲食等方面給他提出合理化建議。

參考詞匯：電腦游戲 computer game 經(jīng)常頭痛 have lots of headaches 背痛 have a sore back

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache. You have sore eyes. You have a sore back. And you don’t sleep well at night. I hear that you played computer games too much. That’s probably why you are not feeling well. I think you should take breaks away from the computer. You shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. You should do eyes exercises to relax your eyes every day. And you should get lots of exercises. You shouldn’t sit in the same way for too long without playing sports.

I hope you will be better soon.

Yours,

Jim

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，吉姆寫信給他的好朋友杰克，給他一些照顧好自己的身體的建議。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：you don’t…；I think… You should…及You shouldn’t…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要祝愿他的身體很快恢復(fù)。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭說了杰克現(xiàn)在的身體問題，接下來給他一些建議，最后希望他的身體盡快恢復(fù)。此處用了have a headache，too much， do eyes exercises，in the same way等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。