Question

【題目】某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文,請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語寫一篇題為"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文參加此次活動。要點如下:

1.嚴(yán)格要求;

2.耐心指導(dǎo);

3.熱情鼓勵;， .....

注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80~ 100 ;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱。

Answer 1

【答案】I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to studyharder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, lve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.

Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.

【解析】 這是一篇要求感謝自己老師的文章。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一，三人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。